|B&A| My writing feels so damn pathetic recently...?

Aww... I actually liked it. The only problem I see is the first sentence is a run on, easily fixable. You're writing is good, it must be hard to write with the P.O.V. being one on an insane person. I want to read on, I'm curious as to why she hit her boyfriend with a bat? but it's really good, I'd give it an 8 or a 9. Lisa, your writing isn't crap, so don't tell yourself it is. You probably just had an off day, I know I do. My good days are rare, my off days are common. So don't worry, we're here for you for support, and well, telling you the truth, your writing is great!